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Im Sorry...

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Why is it
Everything I love
Hates me in return?

It's as if
Everything I touch
Crumbles to ash.

A butterfly
That I want to catch,
But eludes my fingers.

It's you.
I want you to hold me.
I want you to love me.

An evil thing:
Jealousy. A part of me;
I'm filled with evil.

I'm sorry,
I can't help myself.
There are no excuses.

  I'm sorry I love you.

EDIT: So, every now and then, someone new wanders in, relates to this very old piece of writing, and comments and/or favs. First of all, thank you. I never imagined that something I wrote would reach out to other people, let alone years after it stopped being relative.

For those of you that find this piece sings to your soul, I wish to simply say, I recognize you. I don't believe it is uncommon for many people to share these feelings at least once in their life, but all the same, most people react by bottling and hiding away. I wrote this piece as a way to circumvent that bottling. Anyone who feels that they may share in the feelings here, or feels burdened by the weight of depression at all, I wish to tell you that you are not alone. I encourage you to open up to your peers, but if that is not possible, I will always be an open and friendly ear. Take care, readers. :)

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just something i wote in my 4 period (blach, i hate history) but yeah it is based around actual emotion. cause its nothing too new. if you know me at all you will have heard the similar hing about 50 million times now and im sorry for being repetitous
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